I've been chugging through the pages and a lot is changing with book two...for those of you who have read bok two, here are some of the changes...

1. There is no distant feelings between Chen and her father...she's too tough for that and I feel that it weakened her character.

2. The 'stealing of the Aquila and the Orca' is much more action packed...they don't just walk in...and Will Kensel and Scrap are armed with large Power Welders - dangerous.

3. The 'cult of Silla' has a much larger roll at the beginning...

more later

started slashing and burning book two - BEYOND. Rather fun now realizing how much all of the editing helped book one.