Thursday, September 11, 2003

JESSICA'S STORY

Part two is now on the sketchbook page...if you have not read part one, go here...

Wednesday, September 10, 2003

FIRST WORDS BACK ON ENTROPY GATE - BEYOND

I just heard back from one of my primary "story" editors re: EG 2.
"...a lot more action than the first one."
"There seemed to be a lot of carnage, yet nothing gratuitous or gory...it seemed appropriate to the story."
"Grace (Monical) is truly a bad person...the 'Guardians' come across as such evil individuals...they really are evil."
"The (part I can't mention as it would spoil the story) really shows the power of God."


We plan to meet soon to discuss some theological issues and I hope to have more quotes...in all, I'm very excited...

Tuesday, September 09, 2003

I could have sworn that I all ready posted this...

...but for some reason it's not here. As I was sitting at home one RARE day when the kids were gone with Kristi and the house was clean andI had no work and there was nothing on TV and I didn't feel like painting and the phone wasn't ringing and the dog didn't need to go out...I came up with an interesting idea...I always say that a good book has great characters and therefore the story should be able to take place in any genre or time period...that got me thinking. What if Entropy Gate took place during the turn of the century (ie late 1800's early 1900's)...am I sure I didn't post this....it sounds so familiar...anyhoo, I got to thinking about it on said rare day and I realized that it could actually work...the next time that I have a half hour of spare time I'm going to flesh out a synopsis of the story as if it were told "back in the olden days"...those of you who have read the book might think it's impossible, but it could really work...