Wednesday, July 12, 2006

Thought I was ready...again...

I rearanged some of the first fifty pages of the manuscript.

Instead of it all being about Michael in the desert, I now have...

Chapter One - A scout class vessel sent by Dr. Dolson orbiting Venus and the murder of Dolson.

Chapter Two - Michael meeting Artimus and leaving with the Deep Prophets.

Chapter Three - Chen boarding the Corona and learning aout her mission.

Chapter Four - Michael agreeing to the mission.

NOW I'm ready.