Thought I was ready...again...
I rearanged some of the first fifty pages of the manuscript.
Instead of it all being about Michael in the desert, I now have...
Chapter One - A scout class vessel sent by Dr. Dolson orbiting Venus and the murder of Dolson.
Chapter Two - Michael meeting Artimus and leaving with the Deep Prophets.
Chapter Three - Chen boarding the Corona and learning aout her mission.
Chapter Four - Michael agreeing to the mission.
NOW I'm ready.